I am feeling squashed. I am squashed in the stomach. I was on the hill and riding down it. I was so scared, the wind was so heavy and the road was so bumpy. It was so fast i couldn’t contol it. There was a huge rock, my tyre hit it, I was rolling down the hill. eventualy the bike fell on me when i got to the bottom of the hill. It was so heavy I needed help. It was heavier than I expected. I grabbed my phone and called my friend i told him I was stuck.
Seth a great use of adjectives. I really enjoyed your story.